Twice upon a time, a girl with curly black hair named "Pitch Black" "Pitch" for short. She lived out in the woods and always sang to the animals and hated it, but they went there for food.
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MegFis
8/5/2015 06:11:06 pm
Great way of starting the story! The part where you say '' Pitch " for short, I just think it could be in brackets to make the story flow better. Great ending aswell.
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Mrs McG (team 100WC)
10/5/2015 09:11:10 pm
Hello Tom,
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