I was walking along a strange pathway. There were some statues of people and these people weren't just ordinary people. These people were the King and Queen and as I kept walking along the path there were more statues and then a brick couch with a cat that sat on the top. As I was about to sit on the brick couch it turned into a soft couch and then an old lady walked past and sat next to me and when she sat down it turned into a brick couch again, and as she left it went soft again.
23/2/2015 12:39:23 pm
well done i like it when it turns soft every time this is our blog link http://y6pewithall.primaryblogger.co.uk/
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kira may horrell
23/2/2015 05:00:09 pm
very good vocabulary but try and use a bit more adverbs.
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Sarah
24/2/2015 02:57:24 pm
Very good work I liked your blog keep up the good work
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Laura
17/3/2015 06:56:03 pm
I think you should use more descriptive words other than "brick couch" and "soft couch". Over all your story was good. :) :) :)
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