An endangered green horse named Graeme, last one of his kind, was rescued by a strong great dane named Pug who ran away. Pug rescued Graeme when he was stuck in a thin water pipe. Pug carefully pulled Graeme out of the thin water pipe by grabbing hold of Graemes leather bridle lead and pulling strongly. Pug swam pulling Graeme to safety. Pug and Graeme became best friends and Graeme was a horse racing champion but his rider Bob was in a horrible car accident and stopped being a racer. Pug ran away from his owner because his owner Geoff was not treating Pug well.
ebru
12/3/2015 08:05:54 pm
Your story was very intresting, however you could have highlighted the prompt words.
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rachael Harris (team 100)
18/3/2015 07:03:28 pm
interesting story and I'd love a green horse, think about replacing names with pronouns like "he" to make it flow better.
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